Ryan Gaboury
English 110 C
Professor Emerson
15 October 2017
Learning Outcomes
I am planning to achieve this goal by integrating more quotes, and summary to my paragraph’s in order to enhance the overall authenticity of the piece. I had always viewed quotes and analysis very highly on the scale to creating a solid, valuable paper yet I never truly used summary or synthesis to further the paper. I believe that summary especially, is crucial to creating a unique paper since it allows you to incorporate different ideas from others or demonstrate a scenario for your readers that can connect on their level. Not only does this help your argument, yet it also drives the reader to continue to be invested and take a wide perspective on the paper. Moreover, I’d also really love to use better or a greater variety of quotes to benefit my paper. I lacked quotes in general in my first draft, in which I think caused a lack of quote analysis as well given that there weren’t many quotes to produce analysis on. This may be the single most important part of my paper since it is where my argument is fully created and backed by physical evidence, something that I need to expand upon for my next assignment. Lastly, again, the integration of more useful and beneficial quotes as well as the use of better summary will not only help to further and solidify the authenticity of my argument, yet it will also allow the reader to by into the overall opinion and ideas being presented.
